World Beyblade Organization by Fighting Spirits Inc.
(Story) Beyblade: The Soldiers of Athens (Final Ch Up!) - Printable Version

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RE: (Story) Beyblade: The Soldiers of Athens (Ch 4 Up!) - Bladerstormybob - Oct. 18, 2012

Already I can kind of tell the Heracles and Aella are going to end up boyfriend and girlfriend like Zeit and Fan.


RE: (Story) Beyblade: The Soldiers of Athens (Ch 4 Up!) - ChinaBladeâ„¢ - Oct. 18, 2012

(Oct. 18, 2012  10:48 PM)Stormybob Wrote: Already I can kind of tell the Heracles and Aella are going to end up boyfriend and girlfriend like Zeit and Fan.

You don't know that.
And you may not find out. Smile


RE: (Story) Beyblade: The Soldiers of Athens (Ch 4 Up!) - Dual - Oct. 18, 2012

Cool chapter! And great job at track! I wonder which (if any) god beyblade will be introduced next? Can't wait for the next chapter!


RE: (Story) Beyblade: The Soldiers of Athens (Ch 4 Up!) - SilverChronos - Oct. 19, 2012

Wow, I wasn't expecting Poseidon (JK) :3. You got four gods so far. Lemme guess, Zeus and Poseidon's evil brother from the underworld is gonna show up too.


RE: (Story) Beyblade: The Soldiers of Athens (Ch 4 Up!) - Bladerstormybob - Oct. 19, 2012

(Oct. 18, 2012  10:49 PM)ChinaBladeâ„¢ Wrote:
(Oct. 18, 2012  10:48 PM)Stormybob Wrote: Already I can kind of tell the Heracles and Aella are going to end up boyfriend and girlfriend like Zeit and Fan.

You don't know that.
And you may not find out. Smile

Just making a guess.


RE: (Story) Beyblade: The Soldiers of Athens (Ch 4 Up!) - SnakeFangsâ„¢ - Oct. 19, 2012

I like the greek/roman mythology mixed into the story, great job!


RE: (Story) Beyblade: The Soldiers of Athens (Ch 4 Up!) - ChinaBladeâ„¢ - Oct. 20, 2012

Sorry for no chapter yesterday! I got sick Pinching_eyes Here's the next chapter!

Chapter 5:



RE: (Story) Beyblade: The Soldiers of Athens (Ch 4 Up!) - MexaMaster - Oct. 20, 2012

OMG,ChinaBlade has gone Rick Riordan !!!

Cool Story Bro,Here,Have A KitKat!


RE: (Story) Beyblade: The Soldiers of Athens (Ch 5 Up!) - ChinaBladeâ„¢ - Oct. 21, 2012

Here's Chapter 6!

Chapter 6:



RE: (Story) Beyblade: The Soldiers of Athens (Ch 6 Up!) - SilverChronos - Oct. 22, 2012

Omigosh! Thanks, China, for pointing out in that chapter that VariAres had the Roman god of war's name in it. I just realized that XD. Love the chapter. How many god-powered beys are there now? 7? 8? I could barely keep track of it.


RE: (Story) Beyblade: The Soldiers of Athens (Ch 6 Up!) - ChinaBladeâ„¢ - Oct. 22, 2012

Well, I have to rewrite this chapter. I pressed the wrong button, and, lost all my work. So, here's Chapter 7!

Chapter 7:



RE: (Story) Beyblade: The Soldiers of Athens (Ch 7 Up!) - ChinaBladeâ„¢ - Oct. 26, 2012

Dang... No one's been reading this...
I may not continue with it... It's not very popular...
What do you guys think I should do?


RE: (Story) Beyblade: The Soldiers of Athens (Ch 7 Up!) - Cookie Bouquets - Oct. 26, 2012

Haha, my stuff isn't popular and I still continue, go continue, please.


RE: (Story) Beyblade: The Soldiers of Athens (Ch 7 Up!) - Dual - Oct. 26, 2012

(Oct. 26, 2012  8:59 PM)ChinaBladeâ„¢ Wrote: Dang... No one's been reading this...
I may not continue with it... It's not very popular...
What do you guys think I should do?
Its popular! I love this story of course you should continue! My story isnt nearly as good or popular as yours but I keep writing.




RE: (Story) Beyblade: The Soldiers of Athens (Ch 7 Up!) - Bladerstormybob - Oct. 27, 2012

I've been reading it! I just haven't voted, I'll wait until chaper 10 is out before I vote. Keep up the good writing!


RE: (Story) Beyblade: The Soldiers of Athens (Ch 7 Up!) - ChinaBladeâ„¢ - Oct. 31, 2012

Sorry for lack of chapters! I've been kinda busy with school and stuff. The beginning of the 2nd nine weeks is always the hardest. Plus, I've been going back and forth to the hospital. My dad got hurt and... Yeah. Anyways, here's Chapter 8!

Chapter 8:



RE: (Story) Beyblade: The Soldiers of Athens (Ch 8 Up!) - SilverChronos - Nov. 02, 2012

Pretty good chapter. I thought I saw a grammar mistake at first, but I read over it and there wasn't one, of course. You're not supposed to critique the grammar Nazi on her grammar.


RE: (Story) Beyblade: The Soldiers of Athens (Ch 8 Up!) - ChinaBladeâ„¢ - Nov. 03, 2012

*Sigh* The bullies are back. Yeah. They think it would be "funny" to say carp about me. I just want to punch them in the face. They're members on here, too. I'm not gonna say who. They got me at a bad time. With school stuff, my dad getting hurt, and other stuff to think about, I just don't have time for them. Plus, to add onto that, no one really reads my stories anymore. But, I will continue with this story, no matter how much my depression gets to me. Here's Chapter 9!

Chapter 9:



RE: (Story) Beyblade: The Soldiers of Athens (Ch 9 Up!) - ChinaBladeâ„¢ - Nov. 05, 2012

Sorry for double post! No one's been posting...
Anyways, here's Chapter 10!

Chapter 10:



RE: (Story) Beyblade: The Soldiers of Athens (Ch 10 Up!) - Dual - Nov. 05, 2012

Oh yah! Enter awesome Australian character! He's my new favorite Grin Great Chapter by the way!


RE: (Story) Beyblade: The Soldiers of Athens (Ch 10 Up!) - SilverChronos - Nov. 06, 2012

Good job........... KIU!!! I like this chapter, even though that character is... I dunno. Whatever. I don't like the wine god.


RE: (Story) Beyblade: The Soldiers of Athens (Ch 10 Up!) - Dum Spiro Pugno - Nov. 06, 2012

Good, but on the card is said "WBBA of Greece" WBBA means WORLD Beyblade Battle Association, so how could there be a WBBA of Greece? Do you mean the Greek division of the WBBA?


RE: (Story) Beyblade: The Soldiers of Athens (Ch 10 Up!) - ChinaBladeâ„¢ - Nov. 06, 2012

(Nov. 06, 2012  4:34 AM)xXJCherzXx Wrote: Good, but on the card is said "WBBA of Greece" WBBA means WORLD Beyblade Battle Association, so how could there be a WBBA of Greece? Do you mean the Greek division of the WBBA?

Of course, you'd say something about how silly that is. I'm pretty sure you know what I mean. Tired No need to be a smarty pants about it.


RE: (Story) Beyblade: The Soldiers of Athens (Ch 10 Up!) - King of Misfits - Nov. 06, 2012

Whoa!
I really need to catch up and read your new masterpiece China! XD
You got yourself a new dedicated reader!


RE: (Story) Beyblade: The Soldiers of Athens (Ch 10 Up!) - werewolfking - Nov. 07, 2012

I seen the writer in person 1 time