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RE: BB-P01 Vulcan Horuseus 145D - Draft - 桃太郎 - Dec. 18, 2010 OP has been updated. I kept the word "prominence(s)" as I feel it is better than the word "protrusion" in this case. The reason is that when I think of a protrusion, I think of an object jutting out of something (like bone protruding from the skin; sorry for the graphic description). I also changed "protuberance(s)" to "fins", based on Ray Joker's suggestion. Thank you! RE: BB-P01 Vulcan Horuseus 145D - Draft - |Joe| - Dec. 19, 2010 I, personally, think it is ready to be put in to Beywiki now. It looks perfect. RE: BB-P01 Vulcan Horuseus 145D - Draft - Daegor42 - Dec. 19, 2010 Hm, the clear wheel section seems a bit wordier than most other articles. I think using the term wings instead of fins is better as well, since that seems to be the general term used in Beywiki, iirc. RE: BB-P01 Vulcan Horuseus 145D - Draft - 桃太郎 - Dec. 19, 2010 Alright, I changed "fins" to "wings" like you suggested Daegor42, but I left the CW section as is because I want to hear input from other members as well. You have a point that it is wordier than most CW sections on Beywiki, but since the design has a lot going on, I felt it would be best to describe everything that one sees. RE: BB-P01 Vulcan Horuseus 145D - Draft - milkychipz - Dec. 19, 2010 Haha, a note to all those who say no need for multiples I own 2 Vulcan Horuseus. I am planning to get 5 ^^ RE: BB-P01 Vulcan Horuseus 145D - Draft - Mc Frown - Dec. 19, 2010 what would compell you to do that RE: BB-P01 Vulcan Horuseus 145D - Draft - Dan - Dec. 19, 2010 That doesn't justify having more than one at all. RE: BB-P01 Vulcan Horuseus 145D - Draft - Mfb Unboxer - Dec. 20, 2010 I just got 2 Vulcan Horuseus from ebay on December 16. I think it will next year... RE: BB-P01 Vulcan Horuseus 145D - Draft - Ray Joker - Dec. 20, 2010 How does that help though? Just like Dan said, that doesn't say you should have multiples. RE: BB-P01 Vulcan Horuseus 145D - Draft - 桃太郎 - Dec. 20, 2010 @ Mfb Unboxer: Please contribute to the editing of this article. Otherwise, I ask you to not post on this Thread as I am waiting on some tips to change this article up, if it needs any. RE: BB-P01 Vulcan Horuseus 145D - Draft - Kei - Dec. 20, 2010 There are a few changes I want to make, but overall this is excellent. Go ahead and post it. I don't believe anyone has taken photos of it yet, so if someone could do that and then add a gallery once the article has been posted, that would be great. EDIT: 桃太郎, there is one thing you could do for me actually when you're posting the article; if you've read other Beywiki articles, you'll know that instead of simply listing the suggested custom in the "Use in" sections, we like to provide a small explanation as to why that particular custom is useful. Try to add those to your suggestions. RE: BB-P01 Vulcan Horuseus 145D - Draft - 桃太郎 - Dec. 20, 2010 Kei, I've updated the "Use In X Customization" section as you indicated. Please look over them again when you get the chance; I still think it may need some work though. RE: BB-P01 Vulcan Horuseus 145D - Draft - Shabalabadoo - Dec. 20, 2010 Quote:Use in Attack Customization I think that since this is for Vulcan, it should be changed to something along the lines of, "vulcan's full attack potential can be acheived when paired with..." RE: BB-P01 Vulcan Horuseus 145D - Draft - 桃太郎 - Dec. 20, 2010 That sounds so much better to me actually. Thanks a bunch! I'll change that right now. Edit: Fixed. RE: BB-P01 Vulcan Horuseus 145D - Draft - Kei - Dec. 20, 2010 (Dec. 17, 2010 10:15 PM)桃太郎 Wrote: Use in Attack Customization: (Dec. 17, 2010 10:15 PM)桃太郎 Wrote: Use in Stamina Customization: RE: BB-P01 Vulcan Horuseus 145D - Draft - 桃太郎 - Dec. 20, 2010 Thank you! I updated those sections as you described, Kei. Do you think it's alright to post with these modifications done? RE: BB-P01 Vulcan Horuseus 145D - Draft - Kei - Dec. 21, 2010 (Dec. 20, 2010 5:42 AM)桃太郎 Wrote: Thank you! I updated those sections as you described, Kei. Do you think it's alright to post with these modifications done? Yes! I'll just make my other edits once it has been published. RE: BB-P01 Vulcan Horuseus 145D - Draft - Daegor42 - Dec. 21, 2010 I hope I didn't step on any toes, but I was bored, so I decided to post this up for Momo. RE: BB-P01 Vulcan Horuseus 145D - Draft - Ultra - Dec. 21, 2010 I'm mystified by how the quetz article hasn't been writtten even though the blade has been out for over a year and yet this has been out for only a few months and the article was done in days... Regardless good article. RE: BB-P01 Vulcan Horuseus 145D - Draft - Kei - Dec. 21, 2010 (Dec. 21, 2010 3:08 AM)Daegor42 Wrote: I hope I didn't step on any toes, but I was bored, so I decided to post this up for Momo. Thanks! Made some edits. RE: BB-P01 Vulcan Horuseus 145D - Draft - Daegor42 - Dec. 21, 2010 (Dec. 21, 2010 3:45 AM)Kei Wrote: Thanks! Made some edits. Yeah, I wasn't sure if I should have put up a Gallery section, since we have no photos for it. RE: BB-P01 Vulcan Horuseus 145D - Draft - Kei - Dec. 21, 2010 (Dec. 21, 2010 3:50 AM)Daegor42 Wrote:(Dec. 21, 2010 3:45 AM)Kei Wrote: Thanks! Made some edits. Yeah, I just like to have it there as a reminder, like "Hey! We need pictures for this!" haha. RE: BB-P01 Vulcan Horuseus 145D - Draft - Nojo294 - Dec. 21, 2010 (Dec. 17, 2010 10:15 PM)桃太郎 Wrote: However, it can still be used successfully WITH Virgo 90D. fixed... otherwise awesome job! RE: BB-P01 Vulcan Horuseus 145D - Draft - Daegor42 - Dec. 21, 2010 (Dec. 21, 2010 4:04 AM)Nojo294 Wrote: fixed... otherwise awesome job! No, I'm pretty sure it's 'in'. You're not using D with the combo, you're using it in it. RE: BB-P01 Vulcan Horuseus 145D - Draft - 桃太郎 - Dec. 21, 2010 Thanks guys! lol, does Daegor get the credit for uploading it? |