Beyblade Evil Descends - Deeyes - May. 14, 2014
Hello guys! If you could check control panel,you would find out that I love writing stories. I was planning a story and I would love to post it on WBO.Reply to say if it is a good story or vote in the poll.
CHAPTER ONE
'Hey!Give me your money!'shouted one of the bullies.
The boy held by thier hands struggled, and punched one the bullies in his groin. The bully yelled in pain and let go of the boy. The boy starting sprinting through the alley. The bullies ran after him. Waterdrops fell from the sky.
'' Help!" shouted the boy.[/i]
The boy slipped and knocked his head on the concrete floor. His eye's immedietaly closed. Suddenly,out of nowhere, a bey came flying. It shrouded the whole alley with black mist.
The bullies never saw what was coming. There was a scream.
A bully's head got smacked by the bey,and blood oozed out of his wound. No one knew whether he survived. He fell on the floor and didn't move a muscle.
Every other bully recieved the same treatment, and after finishing them off, the black mist dissapeared. A figure in a silhoutte jumped from the alley's roof and landed beside the boy.
The figure was going to pick him up but stopped when he saw the beyblade in his bag.
A Variaries....he could become a worthy companion.
He picked him up and started running away ,hiding himself in the silhoutte.
Chapter two
The boy opened his eyes. He realized he was in a bed. He stood up and saw a PERSON using a computer. ''Hello...who are you? When did I come here?" asked the boy. He had a flash what was happenning at the alley.
The person using the computer turned around and looked at the boy.The person had jet black hair,a bit messed up like Kyoya's?! He wore a blue colour jacket and black pants.
" My name is Sean lucci. And this is Morpheus." Sean said.
''Uh,I'm Matthew...and this is Variaries!"Said Matt.
''okay,I want to know what was going on there in the alley?"asked Sean.
'It's a long story..you are welcome if you can be patient,"said Matt.
"Yup,just go ahead.."said sean.
" Okay,here it goes. DO you know about the incident aobut the revival of nemesis a few years ago?There were 10 legendary bladers who were supposed to stop the revival of the Diablo nemesis and they succeeded. One of the legendary bladers was my brother. His name was King. He owned the bey I showed you.
He was killed by a madman named Arnold who wanted the power of all the beys. Since the tournament of King of the Beyblade world is coming, he is on his attempt to make the best Beyblade ever. Because the price is a mouth watering Hundred million Dollars. King gave the Beyblad eto me and told me to make a run for it before he died. Now the people who chasing me in the alley were his minions...but he doesn't know the danger in it. He will awaken a evil beyblade after crossing the limits. It's name Ripper Krakken. You have to help us, Sean...You have to defeat him once and for all..."
TO BE Continued...
I will write again...
RE: Beyblade Evil Descends Part 1 - Dual - May. 14, 2014
First, you should probably put your chapters in spoilers.
It's alright, but the grammar needs a lot of work, and you should try to space it out more.
Beyblade Evil Descends Part 2 - Deeyes - May. 14, 2014
Thanks for the advice Dual and I will work on the grammar. But I don't know how to put spoilers since I am just new....(I joined day before yesterday..)
Beyblade Evil Descends
Part 2- Squid the killer
Chapter three
Rain drops beat on the ground. A heavy rain was going on. Suddenly, Sean broke through, sweating, and scared. Behind him ran Matt shouting directions to the Arnobladers HQ. There were cameras outside the building, seeking intruders who did not belong to Arnobladers even before they arrived. Matt's Variaries broke every camera in a flash. Sean walked through the auto-doors
and entered the HQ.
''Hey! Where are you going!" shouted one of the Men inside.
''To make your Boss Seaside food!" replied Sean.
Sean launched his Bey. The guy launched a Death Quetzelcoatl at his Shattered Morpheus. Quetzelcoatl started attacking his Shattered Morpheus on the facebolt. The Morpheus moved back and let the Quetzelcoatl fall. Then Morpheus attacked the Quetzelcoatl's Tip and suddenly it happenned so abruptly. Morpheus suddenly turned into a Transparent figure and went through Quetzelcoatl.Then Quetzelcoatl fell and each of the parts flew off. Then more men came to stop him.
'' I don't have any time for this, you Idiots!"Shouted Sean.
"STOOP HIIIM!!!"shouted one of the men.
"SHUT UPPP!!! Shattered Morpheus! Use your special move! Shattering Darkness Explosion!"
Shattered Morpheus's Bit-Beast, a fog which turned into Ninja with a glowing staff whacked the roof of the area. There was a large explosion of darkness that filled the area. A few minutes later, the darkness resided and there was only dust.
And then there were footsteps.
"Now who did this mess?" said a figure.
"I did. I hope you are Arnold! 'cause I'm here to kill ya'!"shouted Sean.
" What the heck are you talking about?" said the figure.
All of a sudden, a beyblade flew out and hit his chest. Arnold ripped his blade and smashed his bey back. " Killer Squid! Destroy him!"
Squid started attacking Morpheus and Morpheus dodged it. Morpheus went in a circle and atttacked him from under. Squid and Morpheus hit each other again and there was a large blast of recoil. Fog filled the place again. Suddenly, Morpheus went super fast and it was back to it's original power.
"My Morpheus absorbed the impact with it's rubber! Now it's 4D bottom has turned to it's second mode-superspeed mode!It's gonna deliver the same damage doubled..."said Sean.
'Let's just see! Use your special move... Squid-Ink strangling Suffocation!"
"You carp!!!What have you done!" screamed Sean.
The wires broke and there was a large explosion of air and heat.
"AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAHHHHHH!!!"shouted Matt, who was lying in the rubble of the roof.
To be continued...
Next part is coming soon...
Post your comments!
And someone tell me how to do a spoiler!
RE: Beyblade Evil Descends Part 1 - Dual - May. 14, 2014
You can do a spoiler by typing this: [spoiler] Write whatever you want in spoilers here. [/ spoiler]
Just don't put the space between the / and the "s".
RE: Beyblade Evil Descends Part 1 - RagerBlade - May. 14, 2014
Not a bad story. Is this weekly or daily? Just want to know if there is a schedule.
Beyblade Evil Descends Part 3 - Deeyes - May. 15, 2014
Thanks for telling me how to put the spoilers Dual and thanks for asking RagerBlade, it is daily and maybe multiple times a day.
Beyblade Evil Descends
Part 3- We are Team dungeon!
Chapter four
''Hey! Wake up!"
"Pour some water on his face..."
"One bucket comin' up!"
There was a large amount of cold water dumped on Sean's face. He woke up from his nap screaming and struggling.
"It's COOOOOOOOOOOOOLLLDDDDD!!!"
"Whoa! Calm down, dude!"
Sean was fully drenched in cold water. Then he looked at the guys infront of him. Three equally tall people. one of the guys was wearing a red jacket, with a white shirt inside and black pants.
The other two guys looked at Sean like he was a being from another planet...
"Hey, Masamune! Toby? What's with the looks" Said the boy wearing the red jacket.
"It's nothing Zeo... I was just looking at him...Hey, Dude! What was going on there! And who are you? And what was Matt doing with ya'?"asked one of the guys.
" YOU KNOW HIM?!"asked Sean.
" Yup. Now tell me what was going on there."
"Well..." Sean started from the time he saved Matt in the alley to the time he went to defeat Arnold.
"Oh... so that's what happenned there. TIME TO INTRODUCE OURSELVES! He's Masamune! I'm Zeo! And he's our Leader, Toby! We formed a team named Team Dungeon! Well, King was part of it till he got killed and we got the news in an instant. We found out that Arnold was planning to win the greatest price in all of Beyblade History. We were going to Arnobladers Headquarters and we saw the whole place wrecked and destroyed. We saw you and Matt lying under the rubble and got you both out of the mess and took you here. By now, you know there is no use of tryng to stop him since his has already registered for KOFTB tournament. Killing him or stoopping him won't be any use right now since he has already gone seeking the legendary bladers. But we can warn the other bladers or beat him in the tournament... but the Killer Squid has already updated since he has kidnapped two bladers: Tithiand Dynamis and his Killer squid is now Ripper ness.
Chapter five
" Who are these guys Kyoya?"asked Gingka.
"I don't know but I'm ready to crush these beys to a pulp...they killed Dynamis..."
Fang leone started smasshing every bey in the way. Then BIg bang pegasus started knocking every Bey onto the walls. Suddenly, one bey enetered the battle and destroyed every bey in sight.
It was Tsubasa.
"Someone wants to meet you.."he said.
TO BE CONTINUED
Beyblade Evil Descends
Part 4- Kenta's sacrifice
Chapter six
"Okay,Who are you guys?" asked Kyoya.
"I'm Sean and this is Matt. Those guys are-"
"Hey Masamune! Long TIME NO SEE!" shouted Gingka, hugging them all.
And so Sean, started explaining from when he saved Matt from the alley to the time Team dungeon found them. Gingka soon understood and related to Dynamis.
"He's Dead?!" asked Masamune, really surprised.
"Yup. I know it's bad..." replied Kyoya.
" You guys just be safe..." said Matt.
Sean then left, but suddenly stopped by Gingka.
"No one leaves without a battle!"
"Yup!"said Kyoya.
"Nope..I don't wanna battle!" said Sean.
"But I wanna! It will be a perfect tag battle!"Said Matt.
"Fine! I'll come!" said Sean,sighing and groaning.
Chapter two
"And the match between one of the legendary bladers- Kenta Yumiya and Hyoma begins in...
3..."
"What the heck are you talkin' about you carp! This is a official match! Don't carp on me!"
"2!"
"Sorry sir! It's real and urgent!"
The man who said that suddenly froze. His eyes were focused on something. And then he fell to the floor, dead. Behind him a man smoking a cigar chuckled and smoke emitted from his gun.
"Better tell him.." said the man who shot the messenger.
"Let it-"
"STOOOOOOP!!! You have a visitor Blader DJ!"
"What?"
Blader Dj walked away from his commentator chair and started walking away. Suddenly, two men closed his mouth and took him away.
And then the screens all over the stadium changed to Arnold's face.
"We are holding DJ Blader hostage. If you want him back, we need a legendary blader to give his power.."said Arnold.
Kenta gasped. He gritted his teeth. He tied his hands behind his back. He knew what he had to do. He cared more about someones life than his power.
"STOP!!!!"he screamed.
To be continued...
RE: Beyblade Evil Descends Part 1 - DefStamina88 - May. 15, 2014
Looks like Dual beat me to the punch on this one. Dammit Dual (Jk XD).
But yeah, chapters in spoilers, grammar, spacing definitely needs to be added. However, this does have a great storyline and good descriptions in it.
Still needs a lot of touch-ups, but i think this could be a really good story.
Beyblade Evil Descends Part 5 - Deeyes - May. 15, 2014
Thanks for giving your comments guys, It makes me feel really happy. I hope this becomes more popular.
Beyblade Evil Descends
Part 5- Rise of the Monster
Chapter eight
"3!"
"2!"
"1!"
"LET IT RIIIIIIIIPP!!!"
Shattered Morpheus,Variaries, Fang leone and Big bang pegasus landed on the stadium. Big Bang pegasus stayed in middle of the stadium while Fang leone and Variaries were clashing. Shattered Morpheus headed down the stadium and attacked Pegasus. Pegasus moved back and stayed in it's stamina mode. Sean observed the stadium. Two knockout areas in the sides of the stadium and the place were the beyblades landed was a flat surface which eventually led down.Basically, it was the Dragon's den stadium, but way bigger. Suddenly, Big Bang pegasus switched to it's Attack mode. F.D, also known as Final drive had been activated.It started going around and hitting every bey in sight. Fang leone started hitting Morpheus and pegasus started hitting Variaries. Variaries upper smashed pegasus, almost knocking it out. But pegasus still stood at the edge of the stadium.
"Now's your chance Morpheus!"shouted Sean.
Morpheus went up the pit like it was a ramp and smashed Big Bang pegasus, knocking it out. "Impressive..." said Gingka as he caught his Bey.
"Gingka! You left me alone! Fine! I 'll take care of it myself!"
''Go Variaries!" Variaries started attacking Kyoya's Bey everywhere. Leone pushed him back and performed a Upper smash. Variaries flew back.
"Chris Did not give me the bey to lose! Variariessss!!!Use your special move! KING OF THUNDERSWORD!"
Matt's hair started rising,turning white at the same time, then his eyes turned red and fire exploded behind him.
There was a large explosion in the stadium by Variaries too and there were stones and pieces of the stadium flying everywhere. And then winner was revealed...Sean?
" Your bey crossed the limits Dude.."
" And I won because my morpheus dodged all the stones..."
"Nice match, though!"said Gingka,laughing.
Chapter nine
Arnold observed his bey. What a beautiful one it was... and soon,it would become the most powerful one...The purple and black bey which had just updated- Ripper hammershark and one more star fragment power..the ultimate bey... Ripper Krakken.
"Sir! We are here! shall we land?"aksed the Helicopter pilot.
"No...let me.."
Arnold opened the Helicopter door and ripped his bey. Purple dark force came from it. And when it landed,it unleashed alot of energy.
"BOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOM!!!"
The house exploded. Gingka and kyoya were sent sailing in the air and into stadium.
"What the ---- was that?!" swore Matt.
"I have no idea!"answered Sean. The house they were just sitting in was blown to bits.
'Kyoya! Gingka! GET UP!"said Sean, pulling them up.
Suddenly, Arnold landed on the ground.
'' Give me the power! Or you all die!"
''Never!"shouted Sean and Matt.
Morpheus was launched and with one hit, Dark energy released and there was large explosion.
Sean flew back and scraped the ground. Arnold gripped Gingka's Pegasus.
" I won't let you!" said Gingka taking Big bang Pegasus away from Arnold's grip. Arnold smiled. Dark energy flowed under Gingka and there were more dark explosions right on him.
"NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!!!" Screamed Gingka. He fell to the ground and dropped Pegasus.
"Gingkka.."reached out Kyoya.
Arnold started embracing Pegasus, draining the energy from it. There was another explosion. A large Bitbeast rose and roared.
It was Ripper Krakken.
Then Arnold dissapeared from sight.
"Sean.."called out Gingka.
"No! Come on!'' shouted Sean.
''You gotta save King,me,Tithi, and Dyanamis. otherwise we will.."
Gingka coughed. He closed his eyes and didn't speak.
TO BE CONTINUED...
RE: Beyblade Evil Descends Part 1 - Elite Projects - May. 15, 2014
Thanks for the links!Now I know what a dragon den stadium is!Great story but the chapters could be a little longer.
Beyblade Evil Descends Part 6 - Deeyes - May. 16, 2014
Hello guys! I knew that Links would help and I will try to make the chapters bigger.
Beyblade Evil Descends
Part 6-Sean's past
Chapter ten
"Sean.."called out Gingka.
"No! Come on!'' shouted Sean.
''You gotta save King,me,Tithi, and Dyanamis. otherwise we will.."
"NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!!!"screamed Sean. His fingers scraped the ground.
Suddenly, memories entered his mind. He buried his hands in his head. It was aching. He couldn't stop it. The memories flooded his brain.
"Sean, you are coming with us today for our ceremony! Your dad has finished his research for the potion of healing! Now I will be able to buy you anything you want!"said Sean's mother, wearing her Lab coat at the same time.
"Okay, Mom! Yay!" said small Sean.
" Sara! Come on! We are late!" shouted his father. His father's name was Kenton Lucci, who was actually french and his mom was from America she was Sara Lucci.
Sean and his Mother hurried out to the sunny day and took place in the car. The car roared and sped away.
"Are you excited, Sean?" asked his father in the front seat.
" Sure I am!" said Sean.
" You should be!" said his father, stroking his hair.
Thier car suddenly halted at the lab.
'LUCCI RESEARCH LAB' it read out. Sean opened the door and stepped out. They started walking through he path to the Lab. When they stepped in they knew something was wrong. There was no one there. Suddenly, they heard someone.
" I've been waiting for you Mrs Lucci and Mister Lucci. I have a gun here, and sending out any Beyblades won't be no' use-"
"You mean 'any' use!' shouted Sean.
" Shut up kid!"said the voice. A bullet sailed right over Sean's hair. The figure who was talking revealed himself.
" Gimme' the potion of healin'!"said the figure.
"Never!" Shouted Kenton Lucci and he lunged at the figure. He took out a gun and pressed the trigger. But it didn't hit Kenton. It hit Sara Lucci.
She fell to the ground, dead.
"---- you!' swore Kenton. And then another bullet passed through Kenton Lucci's Body. He froze and fell to the ground. Sean had his mouth open the full time.
"What do we do with the boy?'' said one of the men.
"He won't do anything. So just spare him!" said the other man.
" Fine... this potion is going to make me rich when I sell it!"said both of the men, laughing. Then they jumped out of one of the windows.
"Mom?Dad?" said Sean, running around thier bodies.
His mom didn't move a muscle. Her Heart had stopped beating.
"Sean..." said his father, reaching out.
"Dad!" said Sean, hurrying towards him.
" Come on here.When the Police come here...tell them that the Thieves called Jack and Ziggaraut stole the medicine. And tell them about my will. I will give all my remaining money to you...and, go to that table."
Sean saw a package on the table that his father was pointing at. He went and took it. "There is something very special in it. I have dedicated almost all of my research to it.. and... take care..."
Blood fell from his lips. His head slumped back on the floor.
"Dad?Dad?! NOOOOO!!!" Shouted Sean, and his scream was heard for miles and miles.
After taking his father and mother away to the graveyard, and going to the funeral, Sean returned home with his aunt. He was sitting on the bedroom feeling down. And then he saw the package on the table. He reached out for it, and then for a second, he felt like flinging it away.
But he ignored the thought and opened the package.
Two papers fell out.
One read out- Opereation Dream eater.
The second read out- Shattered Morpheus D.E standing for dream eater. And then he felt a slight feeling.Then there was a plastic cover and inside it was a bey. He ripped it open and felt the bey. It was like a energy flowed through him. And it felt like...his father was talking to him.
And he knew this would be his only friend for life.
Chapter eleven
"Hello?"
"Hello?"
"Why do we always end up with this guy?"
"Well...we need a new recruit..."
Sean woke up from the nightmare. He rubbed his head. He must have dozed of in all of the thinking.
" Guys...Ripper Krakken is here... I don't know what we can do...the only way is to destroy his Bey,which can only be done if we participate in the tournament..."
" Slow down dude! Don't start when you've just woke up..." said Zeo.
'' Yeah. We know what hapenned and we are depressed..." said Toby.
" But we were thinking whether you and Matt would like to join Team Dungeon. I mean for the KOTB tournament,"said Masamune.
"I guess so..."said Sean, forcing a small smile.
Chapter twelve
'' Who is it... who wakes me up..."
" It's me, Arnold, and you are my bey...'
Arnold was floating in some black and dark void.
All of a sudden, Tentacles came out of nowhere and wrapped Arnold.
" I AM NO ONES STUPID BEY!I will squeeze your guts out if you disobey me. You have to crush every stupid bey in your way. If you lose to even one of them, I will drag you back into this void and leave you here, and you should let me take the energy from them..." said a voice.
" What do you need that much energy for?"said Arnold.
" Well, swallow part of the world..."said the voice, and Arnold could imagine it licking its lips, if it had any.
" Well, your spirit energy will be my first meal..."said the voice.
The tentacles started squeezing his body,and black colour particles flew out of his mouth.
''NOOOOOO!!!LEAVE MEEEE!!!" Screamed Arnold.
TO. BE. CONTINUED.
RE: Beyblade Evil Descends Part 1 - RagerBlade - May. 16, 2014
Chapter 11 and 12 are way too short. I think you should add to them.
RE: Beyblade Evil Descends Part 1 - Deeyes - May. 16, 2014
I am trying actually, but I have to finish it as quick as possible since school is gonna start in a few days.
Besides, I want to make it short like the episodes.
Anyway, I know it is too quick to ask this, but which is your favorite chapter\part.
RE: Beyblade Evil Descends Part 1 - Elite Projects - May. 16, 2014
Chapter 10 is my favorite!
Beyblade Evil Descends Part 7 - Deeyes - May. 17, 2014
Beyblade Evil Descends
Part 7- Hattori THE Ninja!
Chapter Thirteen
"So, here's the plan...Arnold will easily make it to the finals since his Bey can easily destroy every other bey in his way, and you should extract some energy from some of the legendary bladers, if there are any left...'' explained Toby, showing the list of bladers on a graph on a PC.
''Who are we up against?" asked Matt.
"It's name is... Stealth fighters..."
"Who are they?" Sean asked.
"Some guys crazy about Ninja and Samurai and fighting techniques..."said Masamune.
"When's the match? ''
''Right after Lunch..." said Zeo.
"Then let's go get some food!'said Masamune, making a run for the kitchen.
"Come on. I'm hungry''said Sean, holding his stomach.
Porkchop,and hot and steaming fried rice with ketchup was served for lunch. Sean gratefully accepted it. Apparently,it was ordered from a restaurant. Right after luch, some guy with a black suit and black sunglasses came and fetched them, drove them to a large stadium.
''What the heck!"said Sean, totally stunned.
'There were thousands of spectators everywhere staring and cheering at them.
''Go forward Sean...the first match is yours," said Toby.
"MINE? Okay the rules are the same aren't they?"said Sean, very excited.
"Yup. Go ahead."
"And, Sean and hus Bey Morpheus have enterd the battle. Who will win? Will it be Shattered Morpheus? Or Blitz Hattori? It all starts in 3,2,1!"said the commentator.
"LET IT RIP!"shouted Sean and the other boy there.
"Nick and Sean's Bey's have been successfully launched in..."said the commentator.
Morpheus had started attacking Hattori. Hattori and then made a circle, went up the pit, and ht Morpheus at full speed. Morpheus flew back. Sean smiled.
"My Morpheus just absorbed Impact..."said Sean.
'What?" asked Nick, almost laughing.
Morpheus switched modes and attacked Hattori in a flash. Hattori recoiled and almost went out.
Hattori then dissapeared.
"What the-"said Sean,really surprised.
Then Morpheus started getting attacked from all sides.
"You wanna play that way? Fine!"said Sean.
"What are you going to do?"said Nick.
"It seems Sean has a trick up his sleeve!"said the commentator.
"MORPHEUS! USE YOUR SPECIAL MOVE! SHATTERING ELECTROBOLT PUNCH!"shouted Sean.
The Bitbeast of Morpheus rose and turned into a Mage. It's hand extended with electricity and hit the Bey,wherever it was.
The Bey appeared again and this time Shattered Morpheus was prepared. It smashed Hattori and Hattori flew out.
"And the winner is Sean!"
The whole crowd cheered for him.
Sean went back and sat on the bench.
"Nice work, Sean..."said Toby. Then he saw Matt heading out.
"The next match... Variaries the god of war versus the Stealth killer Bey- SHADOW WOLF!" shouted the commentator.
Matt and the other girl were looking eye to eye with determination and horror mixed together.
TO BE CONTINUED...
RE: Beyblade Evil Descends Part 1 - mkarthick - May. 19, 2014
Ninja Hattori, as in the show?
RE: Beyblade Evil Descends Part 1 - Deeyes - May. 19, 2014
Nope...one of the most famous ninjas in the history of ninjas-That Hattori.
Beyblade Evil Descends Part 8 - Deeyes - May. 20, 2014
Beyblade Evil Descends
Part 8- Welcome to the wild
Chapter fourteen
Matt headed for the stadium, breathing heavily. He knew in his mind this would be Bad Match.
He loked at the girl at the other side of the stadium. She was smiling, except it wasn't a friendly smile. It was a evil smile, deciding his fate.
"Are you ready, Bladers?'' asked the commentator.
"Yes..."Matt replied.
"Okay then, 3,2,1...Let it RIIIIIIIIIPPPPP!!!"
Matt ripped his Bey and sodid the other girl. Variaries started bashing Wolfand 3plf was already going low on spin. Wolf then started going in a circle and hit Variaries. Variaries slightly scraped the ground and came back up. Variaries had lost alot of spin.
"Okay,now! Variaries, use your special move... Sword of Ares!"
The bitbeast of Ares appeared and charged it's strength into the sword held in his hand.
It brought it's sword down, but then, all of a sudden, Shadow wolf dissapeared.
"What the-"said Matt.
Then he saw what was going on. Shadow wolf had turned to seperate black particles.
"That's my pack... welcome to the wild!''said the girl.
"Wow! This is amazing! Laura's Bey has dissapeared and turned into Nanoparticles!" said the commentator.
Variares's Bitbeast slashed it's sword, but the nanoparticles seperated. The Bitbeast dissapeared and the Beyblade was back inthe stadium. The Nanoparticles came and started interfering with the Delta Drive, causing it to almost fall.
"Variares! Hang on a second!"
The Variares was wobbling. And then, the audience realized, Matt was talking to his Bey.
"Hey! That's not your pack, Laura! That's your swarm. Swarm of Bee's. And no stupid insect wins over the god of war!"
Variares started get back up and stop wobbling. A red aura glowed from it. It went against the swarm and the swarm started to cover Variares.
'' Now's your chance... new special move! Nuclear Bomb Flames!"
The Bitbeast appeared and with it's bare hands, it made fires appear. First, Fires exploded behind the Bitbeast, then it slammed the stadium. The whole stadium heated up and the flames embraced the swarm. The swarm formed into Shadow wolf once again and the fire started weakening it.
"Variares! Kick it's --- !" said Matt.
The fire cleared a way for he bey and finally, Variares hit Shadow wolf. There was so much impact because of the emotions Matt had in mind, and the hatred he had towards Laura.
Shadow wolf flew out of the stadium and struck the wall.
"And the winner is Variares D: D of Matt Popilus!"
Variares returned to Matt and Matt dropped it in his pocket.
''Congrats Matt!'' shouted the commentator as Matt made his way back to the bench.
And this time, Masamune walked to the stadium.
TO BE CONTINUED...
Beyblade Evil Descends Part 9 - Deeyes - May. 20, 2014
Beyblade Evil Descends
Part 9-Vanishing expert
Chapter fifteen
Remember, Unicorno! the Beyspirit is the important thing in a match! So let's do it!
Yeah!Let's do it!
''Are you ready, Masamune?" asked the commentator.
"Yes."
"Are you ready, Andy?"
"Yes."
"3,2,1..."
"Let it rip!"
Both of the Beys- Blitz unicorno
and Abyss Hydra landed in the stadium, starting of smoothly. Unicorno went crazy and started attacking the bey five times per second.
Sparks flew from the Beys, and Abyss Hydra seemed unaffected.
And then it vanished and appeared behid Unicorno and started hitting it's spin track. But it seemed impossible since Unicorno's Spin track was so low and small.
Unicorno moved back and made Hydra scrape the ground. Then Hydra again vanished, this time above Unicorno. It hit the facebolt an there was a explosion of dust and smoke. Within seconds, it resided and Unicorno was hitting Hydra. Hydra hit Unicorno back and there was a recoil. Hydra then dissapeared and again appeared above Unicorno. But this time it was prepared. Unicorno moved and made Hydra scrape the ground. Then it started going like a wheel and attacking Unicorno. Unicorno was almost knocked out. Hydra was still spinning like a wheel. Unicorno went super fast and hit the tip of Hydra. Hydra fell upside down and stopped spinning.
"And Masamune is the winner! Team dungeon goes to the second round and the Stealth team has been eliminated. Congrats for Team dungeon!"said the commentator.
RE: Beyblade Evil Descends - PhantomX - May. 26, 2014
Nice story and concept! Keep going!
Beyblade Evil Descends part 10 - Deeyes - Jun. 02, 2014
Sorry for the delay,didn't have Internet due to some problem for 3 weeks.
Beyblade Evil Descends
Part 10-Need more Teammates!
Chapter sixteen
In the runway of the Tokyo airport, a private airplane was taking off. Looking out of it's window was Sean. Who could he find? What would be their personalities...
2 hours earlier...
"Congratulations on that victory Masamune..."said Ryo.
"Yes,but your team already seemed to be out of Bladers during that moment. So how do you decide who battles Toby?"
''Uh what?"said Toby.He was wiping his forehead.
''Yeah,Toby!"protested Masamune.
''Uh,well,I just do it randomly...."said Toby.
"Then what's with the cool look when you do it?"said Zeo.
''Okay, that's enough. I knew this would happen.I have arranged a plane out of Tokyo for you people to find some more Bladers. Good luck!"said Hikaru.
Chapter seventeen
"Mom,are you okay?Everythings fine down here. I found some new friends in my neighbor hood..."
The grave yard was dark and it was raining at this time. There was only one girl squatting at a gravestone.
''Whoa,this town sure is windy!"said Matt.
"Yup! We need to find somewhere to sleep too!"Said Sean.
"I think you guys got the right girl for it!'said a voice.
"Who-"
''I'm Maka!"said the voice.
Sean turned back and saw a girl who had a bey in her outstretched arm.
''And this is Moonlight Lupius!"said Maka.
"Oh, we need help!"said Zeo.
''Can you find somewhere to sleep for us?" said Toby.
''Oh,yes sure!''said Maka.
She led the group through 3 streets and they came to a 2 storey house.
Suddenly,she stopped and reached for something in her pocket. She took out her phone and gasped.
"Sorry,gotta go!"she said and dropped a card with them.
"Whoa!WAAIIIT!!!"shouted Masamune.
To be continued...
Beyblade Evil Descends Part 11 - Deeyes - Jun. 07, 2014
Beyblade Evil Descends
Part 11-Moonlight Lupius
Chapter eighteen
"Hey! Where are you going!?''shouted Matt. He started chasing Maka.
"Whoa!Wait up!"shouted Sean.
Maka looked behind her. The two boys were on her trail. Maka ran down the streets for about 5 minutes and then she found the it. The Bey-park was standing in front of her. Before walking in,Maka looked back.
No sign of those boys. Maka wiped the sweat from her forehead and walked in to the Beypark. She walked down the passage to the Grand Beystadium.
...............................................
Sean and Matt were running around in panic searching for Maka.
"Come on,maybe it's this way!"said Matt.
"Okay!"
Matt hurried down a path and came to this junction. There was a board which said BEYPARK and another one which said METAL BEY CITY B-PIT and Sean just followed the Sign for going to the Beypark.
"Sounds cool!"said Sean.
They followed the path and found the Beypark. They followed a path which led to a large Bey-stadium. They went through a tunnel which led to a large Beystadium. And there was Maka battling another blader. The other blader was Jigsaw.
"Eonis! Just keep on hitting!"
"NO! This is it!"
Moonlight Lupius suddenly had electric sparks flying from it's fusion wheel. Lupius charged at Eonis and Eonis was sent flying back.
"EONIS!''
The Bitbeast rose from Eonis. The cow charged at Lupius and smashed it against the stadiuim surface. Lupius then bit it's body and threw Eonis off.
"Special move! Moonburst of darkness!"shoouted Maka.
Lupius suddenly made a large explosion of heat and rocks. Eonis flew out of the stadium and stopped spinning.
''No way..."Jigsaw clutched his Bey and walked through some tunnel which was as exit.
"Hey,I'm next!"shouted Sean.
TO BE CONTINUED...
Beyblade Evil Descends Part 11 - Deeyes - Jun. 07, 2014
Beyblade Evil Descends
Part 11-Moonlight Lupius
Chapter eighteen
"Hey! Where are you going!?''shouted Matt. He started chasing Maka.
"Whoa!Wait up!"shouted Sean.
Maka looked behind her. The two boys were on her trail. Maka ran down the streets for about 5 minutes and then she found the it. The Bey-park was standing in front of her. Before walking in,Maka looked back.
No sign of those boys. Maka wiped the sweat from her forehead and walked in to the Beypark. She walked down the passage to the Grand Beystadium.
...............................................
Sean and Matt were running around in panic searching for Maka.
"Come on,maybe it's this way!"said Matt.
"Okay!"
Matt hurried down a path and came to this junction. There was a board which said BEYPARK and another one which said METAL BEY CITY B-PIT and Sean just followed the Sign for going to the Beypark.
"Sounds cool!"said Sean.
They followed the path and found the Beypark. They followed a path which led to a large Bey-stadium. They went through a tunnel which led to a large Beystadium. And there was Maka battling another blader. The other blader was Jigsaw.
"Eonis! Just keep on hitting!"
"NO! This is it!"
Moonlight Lupius suddenly had electric sparks flying from it's fusion wheel. Lupius charged at Eonis and Eonis was sent flying back.
"EONIS!''
The Bitbeast rose from Eonis. The cow charged at Lupius and smashed it against the stadiuim surface. Lupius then bit it's body and threw Eonis off.
"Special move! Moonburst of darkness!"shoouted Maka.
Lupius suddenly made a large explosion of heat and rocks. Eonis flew out of the stadium and stopped spinning.
''No way..."Jigsaw clutched his Bey and walked through some tunnel which was as exit.
"Hey,I'm next!"shouted Sean.
TO BE CONTINUED...
Beyblade Evil Descends
Part 11-Moonlight Lupius
Chapter eighteen
"Hey! Where are you going!?''shouted Matt. He started chasing Maka.
"Whoa!Wait up!"shouted Sean.
Maka looked behind her. The two boys were on her trail. Maka ran down the streets for about 5 minutes and then she found the it. The Bey-park was standing in front of her. Before walking in,Maka looked back.
No sign of those boys. Maka wiped the sweat from her forehead and walked in to the Beypark. She walked down the passage to the Grand Beystadium.
...............................................
Sean and Matt were running around in panic searching for Maka.
"Come on,maybe it's this way!"said Matt.
"Okay!"
Matt hurried down a path and came to this junction. There was a board which said BEYPARK and another one which said METAL BEY CITY B-PIT and Sean just followed the Sign for going to the Beypark.
"Sounds cool!"said Sean.
They followed the path and found the Beypark. They followed a path which led to a large Bey-stadium. They went through a tunnel which led to a large Beystadium. And there was Maka battling another blader. The other blader was Jigsaw.
"Eonis! Just keep on hitting!"
"NO! This is it!"
Moonlight Lupius suddenly had electric sparks flying from it's fusion wheel. Lupius charged at Eonis and Eonis was sent flying back.
"EONIS!''
The Bitbeast rose from Eonis. The cow charged at Lupius and smashed it against the stadiuim surface. Lupius then bit it's body and threw Eonis off.
"Special move! Moonburst of darkness!"shoouted Maka.
Lupius suddenly made a large explosion of heat and rocks. Eonis flew out of the stadium and stopped spinning.
''No way..."Jigsaw clutched his Bey and walked through some tunnel which was as exit.
"Hey,I'm next!"shouted Sean.
TO BE CONTINUED...
Beyblade Evil Descends
Part 11-Moonlight Lupius
Chapter eighteen
"Hey! Where are you going!?''shouted Matt. He started chasing Maka.
"Whoa!Wait up!"shouted Sean.
Maka looked behind her. The two boys were on her trail. Maka ran down the streets for about 5 minutes and then she found the it. The Bey-park was standing in front of her. Before walking in,Maka looked back.
No sign of those boys. Maka wiped the sweat from her forehead and walked in to the Beypark. She walked down the passage to the Grand Beystadium.
...............................................
Sean and Matt were running around in panic searching for Maka.
"Come on,maybe it's this way!"said Matt.
"Okay!"
Matt hurried down a path and came to this junction. There was a board which said BEYPARK and another one which said METAL BEY CITY B-PIT and Sean just followed the Sign for going to the Beypark.
"Sounds cool!"said Sean.
They followed the path and found the Beypark. They followed a path which led to a large Bey-stadium. They went through a tunnel which led to a large Beystadium. And there was Maka battling another blader. The other blader was Jigsaw.
"Eonis! Just keep on hitting!"
"NO! This is it!"
Moonlight Lupius suddenly had electric sparks flying from it's fusion wheel. Lupius charged at Eonis and Eonis was sent flying back.
"EONIS!''
The Bitbeast rose from Eonis. The cow charged at Lupius and smashed it against the stadiuim surface. Lupius then bit it's body and threw Eonis off.
"Special move! Moonburst of darkness!"shoouted Maka.
Lupius suddenly made a large explosion of heat and rocks. Eonis flew out of the stadium and stopped spinning.
''No way..."Jigsaw clutched his Bey and walked through some tunnel which was as exit.
"Hey,I'm next!"shouted Sean.
TO BE CONTINUED...
Beyblade Evil Descends - Deeyes - Jun. 08, 2014
Beyblade Evil Descends
Part 11-The nightmare of the Wolf
Chapter nineteen
"You two again! I left the card there! Couldn't you have just swiped the thing on the door of the house and gone inside?"said Maka.
"Uh..."
"She did? Beats me."
"Anyway now that I'm here let's battle!"said Sean.
"Huh?You?"said Maka.
"Come on!"said Sean.
"Okay fine!'
"It's on!"
Sean locked his bey onto his launcher immediately.
"3,2,1...LET IT RIP!"
Shattered Morpheus started going in a circle around the stadium. Lupius came up and started hitting Morpheus everywhere it went. Morpheus then started scraping the ground.
"Morpheus!" yelled Sean.
Morpheus came back up and started dashing Lupius really hard. Lupius recoiled and this time it came in light speed. Morpheus dodged the attack and Lupius almost went out.
Morpheus didn't let it come down. It dashed at Lupius.
"Never! Lupius! Use your special move! The Hunter's spirit!"
Both of the beasts arose and this time, Lupius was howling and darkness tangled Morpheus. Lupius lunged at Morpheus and and scratched its helmet.
The helmet broke and Morpheus metamorphed into a black color wolf and attacked Lupius. Both of them crashed at one part of the stadium and destroyed it.
"Using Special moves twice in a row won't help-Maka!"said Sean.
The Beasts faded away and both of them were wobbling. Morpheus then switched to the super speed mode and started attacking Lupius.
"Morpheus-crush it to pieces!"
Morpheus kept on smashing Moonlight Lupius. Morpheus dashed it again and Lupius flew up,it was still spinning though....
''It'sright spin Bey-It's spin equalizing..."said Maka.
"Then I'll hit it so hard that it can't recover!"said Sean.
Morpheus went up the stadium and started smashing Lupius till it went till the ceiling.Then Lupius was smashed against the ceiling,and then Lupius fell down and stopped spinning.
Morpheus landed and spun for 3 seconds and won the match.
"And the prize goes to Sean!"
Someone stepped out of the darkness and gave Sean a crystal facebolt with the exact same beast printed on it.
Maka was shocked and she looking at her Bey.
"Even though you lost,you were blading really good. Wanna join our group?"
Maka nodded and smiled. Sorry guys but now the schedule will be changed to every Sat and Fri or every Sat or Sun since school is starting for me.
See ya next time.
Beyblade Evil Descends
Part 11-The nightmare of the Wolf
Chapter nineteen
"You two again! I left the card there! Couldn't you have just swiped the thing on the door of the house and gone inside?"said Maka.
"Uh..."
"She did? Beats me."
"Anyway now that I'm here let's battle!"said Sean.
"Huh?You?"said Maka.
"Come on!"said Sean.
"Okay fine!'
"It's on!"
Sean locked his bey onto his launcher immediately.
"3,2,1...LET IT RIP!"
Shattered Morpheus started going in a circle around the stadium. Lupius came up and started hitting Morpheus everywhere it went. Morpheus then started scraping the ground.
"Morpheus!" yelled Sean.
Morpheus came back up and started dashing Lupius really hard. Lupius recoiled and this time it came in light speed. Morpheus dodged the attack and Lupius almost went out.
Morpheus didn't let it come down. It dashed at Lupius.
"Never! Lupius! Use your special move! The Hunter's spirit!"
Both of the beasts arose and this time, Lupius was howling and darkness tangled Morpheus. Lupius lunged at Morpheus and and scratched its helmet.
The helmet broke and Morpheus metamorphed into a black color wolf and attacked Lupius. Both of them crashed at one part of the stadium and destroyed it.
"Using Special moves twice in a row won't help-Maka!"said Sean.
The Beasts faded away and both of them were wobbling. Morpheus then switched to the super speed mode and started attacking Lupius.
"Morpheus-crush it to pieces!"
Morpheus kept on smashing Moonlight Lupius. Morpheus dashed it again and Lupius flew up,it was still spinning though....
''It'sright spin Bey-It's spin equalizing..."said Maka.
"Then I'll hit it so hard that it can't recover!"said Sean.
Morpheus went up the stadium and started smashing Lupius till it went till the ceiling.Then Lupius was smashed against the ceiling,and then Lupius fell down and stopped spinning.
Morpheus landed and spun for 3 seconds and won the match.
"And the prize goes to Sean!"
Someone stepped out of the darkness and gave Sean a crystal facebolt with the exact same beast printed on it.
Maka was shocked and she looking at her Bey.
"Even though you lost,you were blading really good. Wanna join our group?"
Maka nodded and smiled. Sorry guys but now the schedule will be changed to every Sat and Fri or every Sat or Sun since school is starting for me.
See ya next time.
RE: Beyblade Evil Descends - RagerBlade - Jun. 08, 2014
Now those are some ok sized chapters. Keep up the good work!
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