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The morning Sun had just risen when 13 year old, Ashoka Timaru, had decided to run away from home. He wanted to leave because his parents wouldn't let him Beyblade. He packed his Beyblades, 2 pairs of clothes, and $50. Ashoka was forced to ride his bike because he is not old enough to drive. He rode for 25 miles without stopping but by then it was 4:00P.M. He decided to eat and when he came back he had only $40 and his bike was missing. Ashoka saw the person who stole it and approached him....
Tell me What you guys think.
The morning Sun had just risen when 13 year old, Ashoka Timaru, had decided to run away from home. He wanted to leave because his parents wouldn't let him Beyblade. He packed his Beyblades, 2 pairs of clothes, and $50. Ashoka was forced to ride his bike because he is not old enough to drive. He rode for 25 miles without stopping but by then it was 4:00P.M. He decided to eat and when he came back he had only $40 and his bike was missing. Ashoka saw the person who stole it and approached him....
Tell me What you guys think.