(Oct. 30, 2017 2:17 AM)Dragunix Wrote:(Oct. 30, 2017 12:09 AM)MWF Wrote: Name: Vis Tordalinewhat color is the layer? I just want to describe its aura.
Looks: pale skin, black messy hair, gray eyes.
Personality: he is highly determined and focused.
Beyblade: Iris sonar.8R.St
Layer: Is is named after the minor goddess of light Iris and is a stamina defense hybrid. It has two main blades with a small gap between them. The gimmick is when hit or at low spin speed the outer ring of the layer is free spining causing attacks to roll off it. The gimmick works like shadow orochium. The God chip is white with a lowercase s behind an uppercase I. The s is black while the I is gold.
Core disk: 8 this disk is a heavy disk allowing for great spin times.
Frame: roll. This frame is circular like polish for lad.
Driver: stable. This driver has a survive shaped rubber on a bearing allowing for great stamina and KO defense.
Overall: Is.8R.St is a strong defensively with a gimmick that causes attacks to have minimum effect and great stamina.
Special moves:
Spiral hold: chain launch on steroids. The combination of free spining layer and high friction driver stop enemy attacks cold.
Retro shoot: Vis swings the launcher left causing Iris to roll left to counter attacks.
Extra: Vis is blind. He was born blind but he learned to listen to his surroundings. He can tell what type the enemy is by the sound of its movement and impacts.
Free has problems facing Vis. Due to The free spining gimmick of iris free can not rely on spin stealing late in the match.
The crowd roared as the two bladers stepped up to the stadium. The glaring light illuminated their faces as Iris Makina and Vis Tordaline shook hands.
"You seem to be set on winning this, Vis. I'll be looking forwards to this," Iris said, as she readies her launcher.
"I could say that you're just as enthusiastic about this occasion, then. Good luck," replied Vis. Both bladers crouch in anticipation, their beys quivering with excitement.
"3...2...1...Go Shoot!" Vis and Iris keep their eyes on their beys as the crowd's cries of excitement soars ever louder.
"Sweep him away, Leviathan!" Iris shouts. The bey responds, quickly dropping towards Iris Sonar with great speed. Surprisingly, Sonar swoops around towards the back of Leviathan, then begins to shove it towards the edge of the stadium. Without warning, a grin creeps onto Iris' face as she moves a finger to the left. Leviathan swoops downwards and evades the pushing force behind it...only to be caught once again and thrown out of the stadium.
"What just..." she notes Vis' neutral expression, his posture, and his eyes. "Are you by any chance...blind?" She knew she was risking his anger, but to her surprise the blind blader nodded sagely.
"Yes. Your bey...she feels like a defense type. Am I correct?" Iris is suddenly unnerved by his senses despite her knowledge of his enhanced senses. Being blind didn't mean he was defenseless. But she was shocked by how aware he was of his surroundings and other beys. "Don't be afraid of me. I don't mean any harm to anyone anyways. Just go."
"Alright, then." Iris was in a pinch. How was she to defeat this blader? Then she knew. Frenzied Surf and Tsunami Crush were her only chances now. "I'm ready, Vis." He nodded. Was it her imagination, or was he smiling?
"3...2...1...Go Shoot!" Once again, the beys shot around the stadium before facing each other the second time for dominance of the center. Iris' eyes gleamed turquoise for a brief moment before her bey lit up. The sea serpent slid outwards along a wave as Leviathan was surrounded in an aquamarine aura. Leviathan charged towards Iris Sonar, then quicky began to latch onto the small gap between the blades of the layer.
Vis smiled briefly. "And just what is this supposed to-" his confidence was replaced with a curious silence, as his ears almost twitched to find the latest news. And he gobbled up the information like a famished child.
"Sonar!" Vis yelled. His eyes snap open, and Sonar is enveloped within a ghostly white aura as it uses its gaps to latch onto Leviathan. Leviathan then uses Frenzied Surf in a desperate attempt to throw the opponent off, but to no avail. Iris Sonar drops to the stadium floor as Leviathan drifts forward in its initial direction, then bursts.
"And Vis takes a win for [insert team here, if any]!" screams the announcer. The crowd jumps upwards, while Rykos watches silently. His eyes and Iris' eyes meet silently as he gives her a nod of acknowledgement, a nod that said, "You did well. Let me take it from here." He disappears afterwards.
"Thank you." Iris whirls around as Vis' voice playfully taps her on the shoulder, his hand now extended in greeting. "That was fun, wasn't it?" Despite her loss, Iris found a smile within her initial disappointment and wore it proudly as she shook Vis' hand. Both bladers left, having gained a respect for one another. However, a new storm brewed in the distance...
Good job. Now let me type up the my variant of the story. Also small tid bit, Vis always does a standard launch first to test the enemy Beyblade.
Iris walks up to the stadium wondering which blader she will be going against. Team Double Threat sends up Vis Tordaline. Their newest member. The two Bladers get ready to launch. Iris is confused by Vis holding his launcher with his arms extended over the stadium. They launch, Iris sonar rolls to the center as Leviathan rushes towards it in an attempt to hook on and fling it out. To Iris' surprise, even though the impact was spot on, Iris sonar did not budge but instead took the center. Leviathan dives into the center to try to knock it out and take the center but is stopped cold yet again. "So your beyblade is a defense type." Says Vis in a almost monotone voice, "Iris, spiral hold." Iris sonar's two wings retract removing the gap between them and the layer starts to free spin. Leviathan is trapped and stops spinning before Iris. "Iris sonar wins by survivor finish. The score is now Double threat with two points and [insert your team here] with two points."
Both Vis and Iris return to the stadium. "Ready for a rematch?" Says Vis opening his eyes, the gray irises staring forward at nothing in particular, " I have something prepared for this match." Iris, slightly unnerved by the indirect glare of Vis' eyes, gets ready tilting her launcher in a way that glave will bounce off the stadium once. Vis holds his launcher close to his right side. As they launch Vis yells "Retro Launch!" And swings his launcher to the left while launching causing Iris sonar to roll left. This causes Iris to panic as the glave bounce caused Leviathan to charge head on into Iris sonar getting bursted in one hit. "Vis Tordaline wins by burst finish, the final score is double threat with four points and [your team] with two points. Team Double Threat wins the team battle Championship." The announcer rounds out the night saying. "Unbelievable! Vis Tordaline has became the first blind blader to win a championship! Everyone lets give the winning team and the runner up a round of applause. Thank you for joining us and see you next time."
Vis holds out his hand for a hand shake and Iris accepts. Vis then says, "Your beyblade is interesting. Movement wise it sounded like an attack type but impact wise it sounded defensive. Hope to battle you again."